check please the sentence
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# vilidator
Hi
Environmental repercussions have long been on the govenment agenda worldwide. Due to this global problem, some individuals opine that the key to solving this issue is to obligate the international organizations controling the countries to reduce consuming damaging natural resources as gas, coal, fuel.
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# vinkara
The sentence sounds super formal but I assume that's what you were going for. I would suggest replacing "consuming" with "consumption" as in "the key to solving the issue is to obligate the international organizations controlling the countries to reduce consumption of such damaging natural resources as gas, coal, and fuel"
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# vilidator
Hi Thanks I try to rewrite
Environmental repercussions have long been on the govenment agenda worldwide. Due to this global problem, some individuals opine that the key to solving this issue is to obligate the international organizations controlling the countries to reduce consumption of such damaging natural resources as gas, coal, and fuel. -
# yongers
Вообще-то это уже запрос на редактирование, кстати не первый от Вас. Вспоминается тема с безработными без смартфонов.)