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    Regarding to a child, being with parents reaps more advantages then being in a kindergarden
    Every parent is pursing the aim of giving the full development to the child
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  • Regarding a child

    brings more advantages than

    all-round development

    Regarding a child, being with parents brings more advantages than being in a kindergarden/A child's being with parents is more useful than staying in a kindergarten.
    Every parent is pursing the aim of giving an all-round development to the child

  • Thanks