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  • Молодые водители намного опаснее пожилых

    Of course young drivers can be dangerous on the road. Young drivers who have never been in an accident may not fully understand that looking down at a phone for only a few seconds can result on a disaster. Also speeding can bad to serious consequences for the driver. Especially under adverse weather conditions such as ice, strong wind with rain, snow. But older drivers also can be dangerous. Elderly people may feel worse during the driving a car. That may result in an accident. However older drivers more skills This can help them in a difficult situation. But age-related conditions can impede their driving ability. And when a crash happens their fragility leads to more severe outcomes.
    In conclusion I can say that people who are careful drivers remain so I to older age and those inclined to too much speed or silly rides manoeuvres also remain so.
    (reasonable and sober driver behind the wheel - that's the key to safe roads)

  • 1speeding can bad--что это?lead?
    2 Especially under adverse weather conditions such as ice, strong wind with rain, snow.--это не предложение, этот кусок присоедините к предыдущему.

    3during the driving a car. ? driving a car
    4However older drivers more skills?где глагол?
    inclined to too much speed? Как это?
    (reasonable and sober driver--артикль где?

  • Спасибо за помощь!!
    Возможно так будет лучше?

    Unfortunately, young drivers can be dangerous on the road. Young drivers who have never been in an accident may not fully understand that looking down at a phone for only a few seconds can result in a disaster. Also, the speeding can cause bad consequences for the driver, due to the lack of driving experience, the driver may not be able to cope with the management especially under adverse weather conditions such as ice, strong wind with rain, snow. However, older drivers also can be dangerous. Elderly people may feel worse while driving a car. An important points is that older drivers have skills that can help them in a difficult situation.
    In conclusion I can say there are good drivers and bad drivers in every age group. No matter how old, do everything possible to prevent car accidents.

  • An important points?артикль со множ. числом?

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  • Не знаю, не знаю.. Фраза была позаимствована из интернета

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  • Ну, так там "point".

  • No matter how old, хочется добавить you are, там дальше обращение к читателю.