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    Dear Mr. Martin Ruane,
    I found your advertisement of tour guide work in today’s paper and I would like to apply for this job.
    I’m 24 years old qualified paramedic, operator of computer, technical specialist and a student of psychology bachelor courses. I’m studying English in my university, can fluently speak it and Russian and know Spanish in beginner level.
    I’m interested in traveling to other countries and I want to see the world. My language skill allows me to converse with tourists, my knowledge of first aid allows me to do it in emergencies and fluency in computer allows me to organize all administration aspects of my work perfectly. So I think I’m fit this work like no one else.
    I look forward to hearing from you.
    Yours sincerely,
    <My name>.

  • I’m 24 years old qualified paramedic---I am a 24 year old qualified paramedic, a compuret operator, a technical specialist and ...

    I’m studying English in my university, can fluently speak it and Russian and know Spanish in beginner level. ---...at the university and I can fluently speak both English and Russian and I know Spanish at a beginner's level.

    my knowledge of first aid allows me to do it in emergencies---...to provide it in an emergency

    fluency in computer allows me to organize all administration aspects of my work perfectly---computer competence /literacy...

    So I think I’m fit this work like no one else.---...for this work...

    I look forward to hearing from you.---I am looking forward to...