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# vilidator
Hi
I try to perefrase a topic.
I have a topic
Some people become famous at a very young age. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion
I write
A majority of people pursue the aim being a famous figure, some reache the aim at an early age.It is claimed that this acquisition brings benefits to the person , meanwhile others subscribe to the opposite point of view. From my perspective, this causes positive and nagative influences in equal measure.
Я не уверена в правильности употребления acquisition
Возможно acquisition a house, acquisition clothes
Но так его не следует употреблять
Как вы думаете?
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# vilidator
Я думаю нельзя acquisition использовать так лучше achievement
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# Vitaly
Вы же сами пишите pursue the aim OF being a famous figure.
Вот и образуйте существительное от этого глагола---PURSUIT.
А теперь вместо acquisition употребляйте pursuit. -
# vilidator
Спасибо Переписала вставила
A majority of people pursue the aim of being a famous figure, some reach the goal at an early age.It is claimed that this persuit brings benefits to the person , meanwhile others subscribe to the oppositing point of view. From my perspective, this causes positive and nagative influences in equal measure. -
# Vitaly
The majority of people---первое слово УЖЕ имеет конкретный смысл.
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# vilidator
Thanks
The majority of people pursue the aim of being a famous figure, some reach the goal at an early age.It is claimed that this persuit brings benefits to the person , meanwhile others subscribe to the oppositing point of view. From my perspective, this causes positive and nagative influences in equal measure.
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# Native speaker
The majority of people pursue the aim of becoming a famous figure, some reach this goal at an early age.It is claimed that this pursuit brings benefits to a person , meanwhile others subscribe to an opposing point of view. From my perspective, it causes both positive and negative influence in equal measure.