Помогите пожалуйста с грамматикой, все ли правильно написала
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iroda6все ли правильно написала? в нужной ли форме?
I would like to study in Korea, because studying in Korea it was my dream during last five years. I'm very interested in Korean culture and language. When i applied to my university i was so happy that my university is cooperating with Korean universities, and i thought to be an exchange student to Korean university it will be a good chance to know korean culture more close and chance to study management in country of my dream. -
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lyusienna
I would like to study in Korea, because studying there has been my dream during last five years. {...} and I thought that to be an exchange student to Korean University will be a good chance to know Korean culture closer and it also would be an excellent opportunity to study management in the country of my dream.
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iroda6
Спасибо большое !❤
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Vitaly
Ну, вот, совсем другое дело.