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# Аleks
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There is nothing that we as individual can do to prevent climate change.
Nowadays I think it's difficult to find a person who doesn't know what global warming is. Global warming is process of permanent rising average temperature. Unless you live on the Moon, you could notice unexpected changes in the weather during last years. The snow can fell in such places where people has already forgotten how it looks like. Somewhere floods and hurricanes have started happening more often. No matter where you are, process of global warming is going on.
It's known that global warming is caused by increasing greenhouse gases owing to activity of humanity. Our planet transforms energy of visible radiant light into infrared radiation which is supposed to go away into the space. Greenhouse gases interfere this process partly absorbing infrared radiation and hold this energy in the Earth's atmosphere. Producing more greenhouse gases, the humanity is increasing absorbing of infrared waves in the atmosphere that causes rising temperature close to surface of our planet.
Reasons of greenhouse are
- using coal, oil, natural gas. Burning this materials is followed by huge emission of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.
- transport. Passengers cars and trucks produce exhaust fumes that are bad for the environment.
- cutting out of woods that absorb CO2 and produce oxygen.
- increasing population of the Earth. This process is followed by proportional growth of industrial production which is one of the mayor source of pollution..
- agricultural chemistry and fertilizer contain different number of chemical compounds that cause appearing nitrogen. Nitrogen is one of greenhouse gases.
But all these reasons are essential part of our existence. Today we can stop using cars, but tomorrow we will face with food shortage. If we limit of burning coal and other natural resources it can mean that we can forget about hot water and warm in our flats. On the face of it, it seems unsolvable puzzle that indeed isn't so. The main key of course is development of technologies. And now we can see some results. Up to now electrocars haven't become ordinary event on our roads but there is significant progress in spread of them. Actually there are some other improvements in counteracting to global warming. Among them is awareness of people about ongoing processes. Of course if tomorrow you start getting to your office on foot instead of using your car and efficiently using electricity and water, it doesn't mean automatic stoppage of global warming. But what will be if other people follow your good example, It can mean that the humanity can get extension of time before irreversible consequences of global warming become inevitable and we will need to find another planet for destroying. -
# Vera
There is nothing that we as individual ?can do to prevent climate change.
Nowadays I think it's difficult to find a person who doesn't know what global warming is. Global warming isартикль? process of permanent rising? Of the?average temperature. Unless you live on the Moon, you could notice unexpected changes in the weather during last years. The snow can fell? in such places where people has ?already forgotten how ?it looks like. Somewhere floods and hurricanes have started happening ?more often. No matter where you are, ?process of global warming is going on.
It's known that global warming is caused by increasing? greenhouse gases owing to ?activity of humanity?. Our planet transforms ?energy of visible radiant light into infrared radiation which is supposed to go away into the? space. Greenhouse gases interfere? this process partly absorbing infrared radiation and hold this energy in the Earth's? atmosphere. Producing more greenhouse gases, the humanity is increasing absorbing? of infrared waves in the atmosphere that causes rising temperature? close to ?surface of our planet.
Reasons of greenhouse ?are
- using coal, oil, natural gas. Burning this ?materials is followed by ?huge emission of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.
- transport. Passengers cars? and trucks produce exhaust fumes that are bad for the environment.
- cutting out of woods that absorb CO2 and produce oxygen.
- increasing population of the Earth. This process is followed by ?proportional growth of industrial production which is one of the mayor source? of pollution..
- agricultural chemistry and fertilizer? contain different number ?of chemical compounds that cause appearing ?nitrogen. Nitrogen is one of? greenhouse gases.
But all these reasons are essential part of our existence. Today we can stop using cars, but tomorrow we will face with ?food shortage. If we limit of ?burning coal and other natural resources it can mean that we can forget about hot water and warm? in our flats. On the face of it, it seems ?unsolvable puzzle that indeed isn't so. The main key of course is ?development of technologies. And now we can see some results. Up to now electrocars haven't become ?ordinary event on our roads but there is significant progress in spread? of them. Actually there are some other improvements in counteracting to global warming. Among them is awareness of people? about ongoing processes. Of course if tomorrow you start getting to your office on foot ?instead of using your car and efficiently using electricity and water, it doesn't mean automatic stoppage of global warming. But what will be if other people follow your good example, It can mean that the humanity can get extension of time before irreversible consequences of global warming become inevitable and we will need to find another planet for destroying.
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# Аleks
спасибо большое!
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# ди
Здравствуйте всем! Кто-нибудь здесь может помочь с полит переводом с англ? Срочно нужна помощь в редактировании.