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  • There is a great holiday in Saint-petersburg which is connected with fireworks.
    Its name is Alue parusa and it's a holiday of Saint-Petersburg schools' graduates. It's celebrated annually in June on Saturday which is the closest to the longest night in a year.
    There are two stages in this holiday. The first stage begins on Dvorcovaya square at 10 pm. Usually the big perfomance takes place there. The second stage starts with immence firework display close to the Neva river. Approximately 1.5-3 millions of viewers come to the center of Saint-Petersburg to watch this show.

  • There is a great holiday in Saint-petersburg?проверьте which is connected with fireworks.
    Its name is Alue parusa and it's a holiday of Saint-Petersburg? school graduates. It's celebrated annually in June on Saturday which is the closest to the longest night in a year.
    There are two stages in this holiday. The first stage begins on Dvor(c)tsovaya square at 10 pm. (Usually )the big perfomance usually takes place there. The second stage starts with an immence firework display close to the Neva river. Approximately 1.5-3 millions of viewers come to the center of Saint-Petersburg to watch this show.