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  • The advantages and disadvantages of education in abroad.
    At the first is "good job". According to the survey more than 58% of graduates have got a good job.But not the fact that Russian graduates of foreign university may find a good job also

  • Advantages and disadvantages of education abroad.

    A "good job" comes first. According to the survey more than 58% of graduates have got a good job. However, for most Russian graduates of international universities the prospect of finding good employment still remains a problem.