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  • The Candle shines on a wall.
    It's heat warms my wounded soul.
    I want to fly to the blue sky,
    But you keep me from flight.
    There lives the lady Moon,
    She begins to shine in silence, soon.
    We'll see her phosphorescence together
    And will keep this feeling forever.
    Give me although the little clue
    That I could find a true love too,
    That I could life again to begin
    And to be unearthly happiness within.

    правильно ли составлено стихотворение?

  • должно быть its heat, и еще я бы написала SO that I could... (чтобы я...) Две последние строчки не очень непонятны по смыслу